Sinaida ([identity profile] sinaida.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] patk 2008-09-26 08:04 am (UTC)

Clearly, the audience is *supposed* to notice something here and if all we're supposed to notice is, that it's "odd" that Rodney spends his day off with Keller at *work* in order for us to realize that Rodney has a crush on Keller, then they clearly overshoot the mark because - yeah - we watched "The Shrine", we *know* that he *said* he loved her. No need to drive that home now with a scene that's - in *that* regard - a step backwards. We heard the words, we *know*.

Und hier musste ich echt lachen, denn das liest sich wie einer deiner Beta-Kommentare zu meiner Story. LOL


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