Feedback on "Heritage"

Oh man, today I'm a happy camper here. :-) I got some feedback on my latest short story and most of the people who wrote, took the time to actually say what worked for them. Pure gold for a writer. Pure gold! What makes me most happy is the fact that, by comparison, I could see that I actually succeeded with the impression I wanted to give. Of course, I have the suspicion that people who didn't like it, didn't feel the need to tell me about that. But hey, on the bright side, that means it wasn't bad enough to raise the need to shred it to pieces. *g* I just had to let out my happiness somewhere, so, what better place than my own LJ? *g*