SGA - Help needed

[patk]

Dear f-list, I'm in dire need of someone who's willing to take a look at a short (about 300 words) English translation of a SGA-ficlet to point out errors in grammar, vocabulary, wording, tense etc. I need to know if the text makes sense or if it sounds like babelfish.

Anyone brave enough? *G*

ETA: Found a victim helper.

Comments

[reen212000.livejournal.com]

Absolutely!

[patk.livejournal.com]

Man, that was fast! *G* You're actually volunteering? *g* Brave soul! THANK YOU so much. :-)

Could you please contact me at guenther dot krayer at t-online dot de to proceed in private?